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02 May 2011 @ 11:21 pm
A thin line between the Perfect & the Best  
TITLE : A thin line between the Perfect and the Best (>>because i suck at titles ><)
length : - ;1,700words
pairing/character : KyuMin, KyuWon
genre : angst, romance
rating : NC-17
summary : Siwon is the perfect boyfriend but....


deidcated to justreadinit :* ; also dedicated to 13plus2 coz i hope she'll cheer up :( ( >> well as if this fic is a good candidate for dat! ><)

belated happy bday to lovekibummie



BETA by AWESOME megmil12 :*



Siwon is the perfect boyfriend. When Kyuhyun was asked who he thinks the perfect boyfriend is amongst the members, he did not doubt even for a second what to answer. It definitely was the group's tall and handsome resident goody good religious boy, the charismatic gentleman, his own boyfriend, Choi Siwon.

What's not perfect about him? He was undoubtedly the most perfect boyfriend, compared to his past relationships. Not that he really has much to compare with, since the only relationship he had before Siwon was with Sungmin.
But even with only that to compare with. It’s undeniable that what he had with Siwon was more perfect.

Sungmin was his first boyfriend, his first love, and Kyuhyun was likewise for the former. They we're still both new to this kind of things. They were still like babies, unsure of each step. They we're still like kids, so vulnerable, so immature. They often argue over simple petty things that would turn out into a big messy fight that would always end with the both of them in tears and with shattered hearts.

But with Siwon, everything was so light and easy. It’s as if they were two grown men, mature enough to handle things. Every time they had an argument, they'll always talk things through before it becomes worse, always ending up settling their differences and mistakes, leaving them happy in each other’s arms.

Sungmin, even if he was older, was so immature. He would always whine over simple stuffs. He's like a child that always needed attention, and bawls like a baby when he didn't get any. And it always gives worries to Kyuhyun.

While Siwon, despite being younger than Sungmin, had always possessed maturity.
Unlike with Sungmin, Siwon's the one showering him with attention, always making sure that he’s fine, that he already ate his meals, and so on and so forth.. With Siwon he has nothing to worry about.

Sungmin was always jealous over simple things. He would always make a fit over Kyuhyun spending more time playing his games than being with him, stating how the magnae loves his games more than he loves Sungmin.

Just when he was exhausted, and felt tired of all of it, Siwon stepped into the picture.
Siwon, who always understood him, Siwon who never questioned him, Siwon… definitely the man who would fit the "Perfect Boyfriend" title.

He repeated the line in his head, and then looked at the tempting man in front of him. He questions himself mentally, if he rightfully thinks that Siwon is the perfect boyfriend, then why was he happy when his lips and Sungmin’s, attached together like magnets that duly know how it badly needs to be with the other.

He let his and Sungmin’s body fall on the bed. His lips clamped to Sungmin’s, sucking that delicious thing. Sungmin’s lips are sweet, too sweet for that matter. The taste of chocolate, sometimes cotton candy, or whatever tooth-aching sweet that the older consumed beforehand, had always lingered on Sungmin’s lips, always mixing in their kiss. And Kyuhyun hates sweets.

It was unlike Siwon’s lips, not too sweet, not too minty or too strong, just enough, a perfect mixture of flavors, refreshing to Kyuhyun’s buds. But no matter what, he still finds himself thirsty and longing for that sweet taste.

He sucked Sungmin’s lips, savoring the sweetness. Though he had always proclaimed sweets as one of the things he hated, Sungmin is an exemption. He’s like Kyuhyun’s guilty pleasure, an addiction that always left him breathless, and wanting for more.

He gripped Sungmin’s head, pressing their heads closer as he sucks every bit of those addicting lips, making him shiver all throughout his body, pleasure tickling every inch of him. He darted his tongue out of his mouth, trespassing another cave as he steals all of its hidden treasures. His tongue slides in every inch of Sungmin’s cavern, pressing his tongue to Sungmin’s. He encircled his tongue to Sungmin’s own tasting every bit of its sweetness then slipping in and out in a sensual dance. They both withdraw as their tongues scream for rest. But the dance floor was immediately replaced by their lips, dancing with wanton moans as their music. Kissing, sucking in every step, hands groping in every move. Kyuhyun traveled downwards sucking every bit of Sungmin’s exposed neck. Wanting more access to the dance floor, he tore Sungmin’ shirt and threw it away. His hands traveled at the now exposed chest, his heart standing to applaud at the delectable spectacle.
Sungmin’s abs were definitely incomparable to Siwon’s. Siwon’s were the very definition of perfection, abs perfectly sculpted, as if touched and molded by the hands of gods, unlike Sungmin’s. But he actually finds himself loving the feel of Sungmin’s abs in his hands. It may not be perfectly sculpted by gods, or whatever of such entity, but it’s as if they were sculpted to rightfully fit Kyuhyun’s hands. As if they were intended to match each other.
He gropes Sungmin’s chest, eliciting a moan from Sungmin’s mouth; the luscious sound adding more fuel to his already burning lust. He lets his hands slide and caress Sungmin’s torso, then slamming his hips to Sungmin’s, letting the other feel his building desire. The feel of their imprisoned members being brushed together only caused the prisoners to protest more for a chance to escape.

“Oh goodness, Cho Kyuhyun! More!” Sungmin begged as he slams his hips upwards, in an attempt to meet Kyuhyun’s. He looked so fuckable, making Kyuhyun insane. He attacked Sungmin’s lips in a hot, messy kiss as they dry hump each other. His lips moved to Sungmin’s chest, their mixed saliva leaving a messy trail. He licks the erect nipple with the tip of his tongue, flicking the peak of the nub before sucking it again. His other hand twiddling with the other nipple, as they thrust into each other.

Kyuhyun felt Sungmin’s hands wrapping trough his butt, pushing it forward for a harder thrust, his head arched backward for the particular thrust, shooting pleasure and lust to his brain. He unclasped Sungmin’s tight hold and withdrew his hips from Sungmin’s, leaving them both whining from the loss. Kyuhyun wasted no time as he unclasped Sungmin’s belt. Sungmin hurriedly helped as he quickly eased his zipper down, discarding his own jeans, and Kyuhyun can’t help but lick his lips at the delicious sight. His hands immediately find their way to the sight, wrapping it and letting his body lavish the amazing feel of Sungmin’s member in his hands.

Sungmin’s member wasn’t as big or as flattering as Siwon’s. Siwon was undeniably big and thick, a perfect fit inside Kyuhyun, giving the latter an amazing feel, stretching every bit of his insides until he reaches the peak of pleasure. Sungmin wasn’t a perfect top, not that he could say much about it. Sungmin had only topped him once. It was a one time that completely turned out not good that they didn’t even dare to do it again. But to be honest, nothing could compare to the feel of Sungmin’s member in his hands. He loves the way his hands slide through its contour, much more the amazing pleasure when it’s inside his mouth, naturally sliding in and out. No matter how perfect the feel of Siwon being inside him is, there’s still that unexplainable fulfillment he feels whenever he’s inside Sungmin, their bodies succumbing to each other while an intense euphoria envelopes them.
“Oh Kyu``” Kyuhyun licks the tip of Sungmin’s member as his hands pumped the length. He sucks the tips as his hand movements speed up. After a few sucks and squeezes, he unclasped his hands from Sungmin’s member, earning him a whine from the smaller man underneath. But the moans immediately found their way back to the delicious lips as Kyuhyun tears his own clothing in record time, hard, erect member now poking outside Sungmin’s hole.

“Ready?” Kyuhyun smirks as he eyes the delighting sight in front of him.

“Hell yes!” Sungmin gripped Kyuhyun’s shoulders, nails digging inside the latter’s milky flesh as Kyuhyun starts entering his tight hole. The younger delved in for a kiss, distracting the older as he successfully slid the rest of his member in.

“Fuck Kyu!!” Sungmin screamed in the kiss as he feels his ass splitting in half. He bit Kyuyhyun’s whole mouth earning a growl from the younger.

“Move!” Sungmin whispered before sucking and biting Kyuhyun’s lips, his hips thrusting upward. Kyuhyun immediately obliged as he started to slam his member in and out of Sungmin. They both broke out of their intense, both bodies arched backwards as Kyuhyun slams faster and harder. His member stretching the insides of Sungmin, shamelessly wanting for more as he lifts Sungmin up, and positions the man on his lap, member still buried inside Sungmin’s tightness. Knowing what Kyuhyun wants Sungmin immediately lifted his ass and slams it back. Skin hitting Kyuhyun’s balls, making the magnae lose whatever sanity it is that’s still left of him. Sungmin started riding Kyuhyun, the younger slamming his hip upward to meet Sungmin’s thrusts.

Their hunger still not completely being sated, Sungmin lifted one of his legs and rest it on Kyuhyun’s shoulder, the angle hitting more pleasure as they continue thrusting into each other, mouths moaning each other’s names. And this, this is one of those moments that Kyuhyun loved the most, the moment when he and Sungmin are one. The moment where they could shamelessly show all their feelings for each other, no pretensions, no worries, just the love they have for each other, glowing inside their hearts.

After a few more deep thrusts, they both came at the same time, both lips moaning each other’s names, flying like butterflies in their hearts.

Both bodies collapsed in the bed, exhausted and tired. Kyuhyun draped an arm over Sungmin’s sweaty torso and kissed the latter’s forehead. Sungmin beamed at the action as he reached up for a kiss on Kyuhyun’s parted lips. “I love you, I love you Kyuhyun.” He breathlessly muttered before settling to the comfort of Kyuhyun’s chest. Kyuhyun just froze from his position, not knowing what to say.



i shud stop writing nc-17 dont i? >< >
 
 
Current Mood: jealousjealous
Current Music: Fifth Finger - Iu
 
 
( 45 Sweet Surrender — Surrender to Love ♥ )
Arisuu ~ <33minto85 on May 2nd, 2011 03:46 pm (UTC)
WAAAHH WAE?! WHY END IT LIKE THAT!! T______T
OF COURSE YOU SHOULD SAY I LOVE YOU BACK KYU!
IT'S OBVIOUS THAT YOU SO LOVE SUNGMIN!!
BREAK UP AND GO BACK TO THE ONE YOU'RE MEANT FOR!

This was so awesome!
It was romantic, angsty & kinda bittersweet!
I loved it! And... WTH, DON'T STOP WITH NC17!! IT WAS GREAT!!
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:21 pm (UTC)
^ it would be a chaptered fic ^^".. im just looking if anyone wud be interested for more before i continue it ..
so thank u so much for d feedback!!,, it helped a lot! ^^.. thanks for d comment!! :*
fumikux3fumikux3 on May 2nd, 2011 05:09 pm (UTC)
HUI KYUMIN SMUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT!!!!!!*O* *jumps around like a little child who got her lollipop*

omo SUNGMIN IS THE PERFECT BF!!!!AND I AM SO HAPPY THAT KYU ALSO SAID IT ON THE SHOW XDD!!!
SIWON IS A PERFECT BF BUT NOT AS PERFECT AS SUNGMIN!!!!!8DDD

lol I love how you describe minnie and siwon xD!
oh but you can forgive sungmin so easily for being like bcos of his aegyo xD!!!~<3 WHO CANNOT FORGIVE SUCH A CUTIE AND ADORABLE PIE!?!?!

kekek kyu just admit it that you are still in love with minnie DX!!!don´t cheat on siwon like this...siwon surely will understand it...!it would only get worse if siwon find it out by himself DX!...IF YOU WOULDN´T LOVE MINNIE WHY WOULD YOU MAKE LOVE WITH HIM!?!?!?

oh oh what was wrnog when minnie topped xD!?I would like to know 8D! but this will forever be a secret under kyumin xD!

OMO THIS SMUT WAS SOUW HHHAWWWT!!!!REALLY JUST HAWT!!!X3
both so needy XD!
I LOLED SO MUCH HOW YOU DESCRIBED WICH FELT BETTER!!LOL!kyu likes better to be top xD! not bottom XD!!
but bottom kyu is also hawt *o*! but only MINKYU X3!!!!~<333333

KYU HELL TELL HIM YOU LOVE HIM TOO!!
MAKE A SEQUEL OR WHATEVER!!I WANT KYUMIN TO BE HAPPY TOGETHER WITHOUT ANY REGRETING FEELINGS!!!

saranghaea and mianhae for the short comment DX! not much time Q__Q

AND NO YOU SHOULD NOT EVER STOP WITH SMUT!!!!!YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!ARASSO!?!?!?!?I EFFIN LOVE YOU SMUTS!!~<33333

love,
vivi
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:28 pm (UTC)
lol.. now here is ur full smut bb! XD.. glad u like it bb!!

really?? because i was actually hesitant at my descriptions at first because im hoping i wont offend anyone.. all of those are pure fiction btw ( i think/believe that min is actually more mature than siwon XD lol)..

oh kyu and min's ehemsexehem life.. would always remain inside their room 8D 8D

. this is a short- chaptered fic.. im just looking if anyone wud be interested ^^...

what the heck! YOU CALL THIS SHORT/!?!!?!? SERIOUSLY?!?!?...

oh just admit it.. U LOVE SMUT. PERIOD! XD hahahahaa...

love yah bb!! mwah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fumikux3fumikux3 on May 3rd, 2011 01:45 pm (UTC)
oh yes I so am thankful for this xD!I don´t liked it!!!!
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I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!

oh yes I actually also think minnie is also more mature then wonnie xD!

and I am sad that is like this T___T THEY SHOULD GET CAUGHT BY MAKING LOVE XDDDD!!!!!!!!!AND THEN KYUMIN IS 1000% REAL!!!
and then it will be the top topic of KOREA OR WHATEVER!!!!!!!AND IF SOMEONE WILL BE AGAINST THEIR LVOE WE WILL SHOW THEM OUR KYUMIN SHIPPER POWER!!!!!!!!!!!

YES IT WAS SHORT!!!I COULD HAVE WRITTEN MORE BUT I WAS BUSY!!!DX SO MIANHAEFOR THE SHORTY COMMENT!!

I ADMIT IT EVERYDAY 8DDDD I FUCKING LOVE SMUT!!!!!!!!!!ESPECIALLY YOURS!!!!~<333333333333333

love ya too :D!~<3

love,
vivi
mary15forever on May 2nd, 2011 07:28 pm (UTC)
YOU NEED TO WRITE A SEQUEL!!!
SAY I LOVE YOU,TOO, BACK, KYUHYUN!!! *SMACKS HIS HEAD!!!*
it's really kind of obvious that you love Sungmin, too!!!
How can it end like that??? T___T
please write a sequel!!! *get down on my knees.*
AND YOU SHOULDN'T STOP WRITING NC-17!!! YOU'RE REALLY GOOD AT THIS!!! :D!!!
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:31 pm (UTC)
oh dont O.O .. pls .. this is a short- chaptered fic (this is a prologue actually).. im just looking if anyone wud be interested with it.. so super thanks for the feedback!!.. it helped <3
and thanks ^^" ^^" ^^"
(Anonymous) on May 2nd, 2011 07:40 pm (UTC)
Omo!! This this this!!!! Umma love u for this..
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:32 pm (UTC)
^ is this u my daughter???..

i was supposed to dedicate this to u.. but i was worried that u wont like it because siwon is in it >< ><
suju15_4lifesuju15_4life on May 2nd, 2011 08:47 pm (UTC)
Kyu you idiot! You're suppose to say I love you back dummy! *kicks his awesome butt*
For a genius, he's awfully clueless about romance >.>
No don't stop writing NC-17! You're freaking awesome at it!
Ok Siwon's the perfect man, but Sungmin's the perfect boyfriend, he always will be! He's smart, talented, and so freaking cute that I wanna squish him everytime I see him! >.
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:38 pm (UTC)
OH YES!! imo SUNGMIN IS DEFINITELY PERFECT!!!.. i just relied in kyuhyun's answer in an interview where he answered siwon, wen asked about perfect boyfriend .. but well he answered sungmin when asked who's the best 8D..
and thanks!.. i wont! ^^ .. so thank u so much! ^^
flying13bearflying13bear on May 3rd, 2011 04:51 am (UTC)
Why Kyu didn't say I love you too to Min? T_T What he have for siwon is not love, compared to what he feels for Min (*´ェ`*)

Why stop? Your smut is great! :D <--pervert reader
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:40 pm (UTC)
because i just realized that almost all that ive wrote lately are smuts.. so i though i shud already stop ^^".. so thanks! :D (oh wer all perverts here ;) XD)

thank u!!
ailaling1017ailaling1017 on May 3rd, 2011 05:54 am (UTC)
KyuMin smut fyeaaaah /bricked


Haha idkw but I find the infidelity hot ~ okay, Imma stop nao *disappears*
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:42 pm (UTC)
O.O
well.. i loove infidelity ( i just hope its not wid Siwon XD )
oh aila's a pervert too :p XD hahaha
ailaling1017ailaling1017 on May 3rd, 2011 01:16 pm (UTC)
haha ikr? I actually discussed about an infidelity fic with Gem unnie...keke...and duh, ofc I'm a perv...but only to Super Junior...haha my perviness made me write an ot15 actually...OTLLL
hime24hime24 on May 3rd, 2011 11:14 am (UTC)
don't you dare stop writing nc 17 fics. i just might die if you do. no scratch that i will die if you stop writing any fic seriously. i love this you should write a sequel to it
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:48 pm (UTC)
ur so sweet! but no pls O.O.. i wont stop writing nc-17 then O.O
sure!.. it would be a short - chaptered fic ^^

thank u so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :* :* :* :* :*
Gemmegmil12 on May 3rd, 2011 11:54 am (UTC)
Of course, Kyu loves being on top than bottom. XD cheating!kyu is hot especially if it's Min he cheats with. Tsk tsk tsk poor Siwon. (^.^)

WTH? NO. YOU MUSTN'T STOP WRITING SMUT. THAT'S AN ORDER. hehe~ joke =P
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 3rd, 2011 12:53 pm (UTC)
of course!! no one wants kyu or min cheating on one another!! dont dey dare do so! ><

lol.. then i guess ill have to comply XD hahaha.. thank u Gem!!! :*



jarieldjarield on May 3rd, 2011 12:33 pm (UTC)
I have to say, I’m in love with this story! It actually kind of reminded me a story I know you are familiar with that I wrote myself few months back (I’m Not In Love With You). There was this sense of oblivious comparison going through inside the character’s head on how he plays when he’s with this person over the other – although of course mine did not have comparison of cock sizes… *big smile* Speaking of which, I don’t know if how should I comment on the sexual part of this story, maybe I’ll just play safe and say it was H-O-T!!!

You say that you suck at titles. Well I actually think the title kinda sucks in the creative perspective. But when it comes to message, it was spot on. I’m not lying it was really the title that drag me here. When I saw the title, I know that I should read this. *Of course putting Siwon up there gave more push*... Maybe you are pretty aware that I’m a sucker for this theme – of finding beauty more in flaw than in perfection.

Reading the whole story in its own, I could say that it is very well-crafted. There is no dull part and it seems that every single scene is important. But the best part of the story - THE ENDING…

And I’m done with this review…

More Power! And hope you’re well…
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 4th, 2011 06:02 am (UTC)
ill be lying if i said that ur fic didnt come to mind while/after ive wrote this... to be honest it did, i think after or during ( i cant remember??), it did come to my mind. that is somehow reminds me of ur fic.. but i guess i was assuring myself that its still different and all.. but now that u ( my goodness! the author itself!) also noticed it.. eek now i feel so bad >< ><...im so sorry.. i swear.. i have no intentions on copying ur idea or something.. and im not just trying to defend myself.. but im so sorry.. tbh... this idea came to mind when Kyuhyun said that "Sungmin is the best boyfriend" and i remembered Kyuhyun answering in a different interview that "Siwon is the perfect boyfriend" and it just turned out like this ><. if u ever felt that i did use d idea.. i swear.. im really sorry.. maybe unconsciously i really did?.. since im indeed open on saying to u and my sihae friends dat dat paricular fic of urs.. is one of my favorites..
again im sorry.. lol i know u didnt even mentioned anything about being angry or something.. but i guess i just really overreact (alot of times).. im sorry about that as well >< >< .. lol im wierd, arent i? ^^"

now that uve mentioned that the best part of the story is then ending.. i suddenly dont want to continue it.. since this is a chaptered fic XD..

thank u soo much for A REALLLY GOOD review!.. i must say i really love ur comments since its not just a plain comment.. its somehow like a review w/c im sure authors wud appreciate more! :).. so again.. thank u so so much!!!.. i hope ur well as well!! ^^
jarieldjarield on May 4th, 2011 08:44 am (UTC)
First of all... I'll say it that I'm not mad that I see my story in your fic... I did say that I love it that it reminded me of it right? So no nede to fuss over it... And honestly, I did not thought you intentionally copied mine or copied it for that matter. Never did it cross my mind until you just mentioned it.

And I kinda feel insulted in a way TBH... I feel like you kind of see some bad intention in my comment when all I have were good... And the way you are apologizing almost feel like... What do you think of me? A PMS-ing Cruella Devil who files plagiarism lawsuits in court?. I'm not like that at all... But of course, I know it was not your intention, so yeah...

And now that you mention that maybe my fic kinda unconsciously flowed in this one... I actually kinda feel flattered... Well, because... I don't want to sound conceited... but it kinda feel like I influenced you somehow... So thank you, it was truly a nice feeling to know... Although it may not be the case... And TBH, I already figured it out that the inspiration for this story was that interview... DUH! It was on the very first paragraph!!! Which is nice job by the way for molding it into this story...

And YES!!! You are OVERREACTING!!! Get a Chill Pill honey...

Here's the thing about the ending. I'll tell you a dilemma I have when I wrote my angsty fics. When I get to the point where I put an open-ending; I do have an urge myself to continue it because deep inside I do want my characters to get the happiness they deserve. But of course, it is up to the author's choice to continue on and make it to fairytale or not. But everytime I tried, what popped in my mind was a some sort of a sequel that is sadder. I do personally find more beauty in angst than in fairytale, that's my nature. That's why I let it in the open, because there is still sense of hope in that. At the same time, I feel open-ending gives more interaction from the reader... It makes them wonder... Like I did in this story...

As for you... I'm sorry that my comment did confused your goal. I don't know what was your vision for this whole fic. But personally, I already ADORE it as it is of now... But at the same time, I could see a very good multi-chaptered story from here. There are many possibilities on how the three men's story will unfold. I'm not going to speak about all the possibilities I have in mind because it is for you to figure it out.

*bitchy-crazy mode on* ACTUALLY, continue on... Make KyuMin end up together. And put Donghae in the picture ,and holla!!! There goes my SiHae!!!

*serious-sane mode back* What I'm saying, as an author, it is for you to make a choice. Let it open? or Carry On? You're the writer here, I'm just random reader. This story is in your hands, and I will respect any route you'll choose...

Oh Shit!!! I get carried away again... I wrote practically a NOVEL... I'm so talkative and opinionated aren't I? Anyways, hope you have a good day... And see you around in cyberland!!!
simbasheartsimbasheart on May 6th, 2011 01:03 pm (UTC)
no i didnt saw bad intention nor anything.. im really sorry.. really.. im sorry for the misunderstanding.. i just tend to freak out sometimes especially whem i know im the one at wrong ><.. again, im so sorry..

taking my chill pill.. again.. im sorry ^^..

and thanks for the suggestions.. and actually.. i am thinking of putting sihae in the end..

thanks again.. and i hope the misunderstanding wud be clear out.. have a good day as well.. ^^
Proud.To.Be.An.ELFsjlover_sj_elf on May 3rd, 2011 08:07 pm (UTC)
Oh My Minnie this is just o____________0

Wah unnie I so totally LURVE it!!

Oh My Fuck Minnie oppa is THE perfect bf!!! Well ok, let's say Wonnie oppa and him are tied for the first place, neh~?

Anyway, I know I already told you sorry when we were talking earlier but, again, I'm so sorry unnie for being so late~~ gosh shame on me T.T

And NOOOO DON'T STOP WRITING SMUT YOU'RE AWESOME!!!

Anyway, got to go...

Well, see you next time :)

Oh and, do you think I should post the pics of the SMTown in LJ?

And again, this was d(^_^)b!

Love you~~
~Alex ;) ~
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 4th, 2011 06:30 am (UTC)
haha .. id love to say that Siwon is the perfect bf BUT SUNGMIN IS THE BEST.. haha is taht fine? 6^"


again.. ITS OK!.. im d one who's ashamed! heck! it took me agess to comment on ur fic.. huwaah.. unnie's ashamed.. pls write another ok?? :D..
OFCOURSE U SHUD! :D :D :D

thanks bb!! unni loves u ! mwah
Moep Ki: pic#110194369kou_ki on May 3rd, 2011 10:45 pm (UTC)
<3
I love it! Although he describes Siwon as perfect boyfriend, it's Sungmin he's really loving... right? right?! right?!?! O____O xDDD
Please continue writing, I'm very interested >____< !!!
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 4th, 2011 05:42 am (UTC)
Re: <3
^hahaha... lets ask kyuhyun about that XD..

thank u so much for d comment!!!!!!! :D :D <3 <3 <3
marielovekibummie on May 4th, 2011 05:46 pm (UTC)
wahh.. sorry i'm so late.. TT i'm having a hard time going online here in china.. TT thanks for this.. ILY!!.. will comment after i read it.. :D
marielovekibummie on May 6th, 2011 12:08 pm (UTC)
JDIAJFILJGTIJTGIJXTILERWEJVTI!!!!
SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!! SEQUEL!!!
PRETTY PLEASE?? TT
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS.. >.<
THIS IS A VERY WONDERFUL GIFT...
HUHUHUHU.. BUT.. BUT.. /SNIFFF....
SEQUEL PLEASE... TT
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 6th, 2011 02:41 pm (UTC)
wow ur in china!..
im quite lazy.. but i hope ill get to write the chaps soon.. thanks for the comment dear!!! <3
and dis was supposed to be a gift.. so dont cry O.O... i promise kyumin wud be happy in d end ^^..hugs
marielovekibummie on May 7th, 2011 05:52 am (UTC)
yeah.. so there's a lot of sites banned here.. thankfully LJ is not include in it.. but when i'm using proxy servers to open my twitter and fb.. LJ will not work.. so i need to read updates first before i opened my proxy.. TT thank you this gift.. will wait for update ok?? ^^ we should me once i came back to phil.. :D
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 9th, 2011 01:23 pm (UTC)
thanks bb!!... write more too ok? im sorry for being a silent reader >< >< ><... //facepalm..

dat wud be great!!!.. i see dat ders lots of filipino kyumin writers here.. hope we cud all meet someday! dat wud be fun! <3

enjoy in china!!!! <3
marielovekibummie on May 9th, 2011 02:42 pm (UTC)
i'm not that good lol.. yes.. we should.. ^^ have you tried coming to a kpop event??
simbasheartsimbasheart on May 11th, 2011 01:44 pm (UTC)
^ noope.. d only close to kpop dat ive attended was sj fiesta and ss3.. but id loove to attend sumday! :D :D
are u active at such events? :D
marielovekibummie on May 12th, 2011 07:04 am (UTC)
kinda.. because some of my friends performed there.. ^^ you should try to sometimes.. :D i'll accompany you.. :p
♔ Izza 배 교자skeptic_manila on May 5th, 2011 03:42 am (UTC)
UNNIE!!!!!! MORE MORE CHAPTERS PLEAAAASEEEEEEEEE :)
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 6th, 2011 01:10 pm (UTC)
^ sure dongsaeng!! ^^.. haha
though ill have to say na na im quite lazy.. so updates might be sloooooow sorry
♔ Izza 배 교자: pic#110265094skeptic_manila on May 6th, 2011 01:14 pm (UTC)
^^ its okay :) I'm willing to wait naman :D
DOOBUNANASU1104xsakakix on May 5th, 2011 04:23 am (UTC)
/crying

That ending is so impossibly sad for all shippers. ;_;

Really hott though, much enjoyed~
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 6th, 2011 02:14 pm (UTC)
^ awww im sorry dear...
thanks! :) :)
13plus213plus2 on May 5th, 2011 08:02 am (UTC)
Annyeong~ Unnie-ah~ Sorry i am so late :( Having exams:/ This fic is so is so :'( ANIYO! KYUWON! ANDWAE:( Kyumin :) Kyuwon :( I mean yes Siwon is perfect and all BUT! Sungmin is perfect FOR Kyuhyun! And Yes i love the smut unnie ah~ *smiles sheepishly* Hehe ^^ BUT! NO KYUWON! KYUMIN YES :) And and WAE KYUHYUN NO SAY I LOVE YOU? WAE? KYUHYUN!!!!!!!! U OBVIOUSLY LOVE SUNGMIN AND SUNGMIN OBVIOUSLY LOVES YOU! WAE YOU NO SEE IT? SMUT WAS HOT! HOT HOT HOT~! Yes it is good enough to cheer me up! :) Thanks unnie-ah~ I am happy now :) KYUMIN FOREVER! Sorry Siwon but I know you will find THE ONE for you~ Kyuhyun is THE ONE for Sungmin and SUNGMIN is THE ONE for Kyuhyun~ *smacks Kyuhyun* Yah! U better say i love you! *cuddles Sungmin* We love you okay? Its his loss~ *glares* XD I am crazy :P HAHA~ Thanks unnie <3 Love you so much :D Aishteru!
simbasheart: kyuminsimbasheart on May 9th, 2011 01:27 pm (UTC)
oh im soo sorry for d late replyyy... have u seen kyumin in vietnam?? 8D...
and awww im so glad this cheer u up.. iwas scared dat it wud only make u more sad bcoz of d angsst >< ><
love yah bb!!! mwah!...
allmidnighterallmidnighter on October 25th, 2011 04:28 am (UTC)
wait, now I'm confused... where this fits, before won't hold you back, or after? before a thin line between the perfect and the best 1?
simbasheart: minkyuwonsimbasheart on October 26th, 2011 12:20 pm (UTC)
oh im so sorry for d confusion ><

dis is actually supposed to be like a "prologue".. so this happens after "wont hold u back" and somewhere between chap.2 of thin line... i hope it makes sense?? >
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